Beta Reader Feedback

You’re reading an early draft. I’m looking for honest, specific feedback that helps strengthen story, pacing, and credibility.

What I’m Most Interested In:

- Where you felt pulled in vs. pushed away.
- Confusing moments or timeline breaks.
- Dialogue that felt real vs. staged.
- Anything that made you stop reading.

Please read the chapter before submitting feedback. Partial or skim feedback is fine — just note how far you read.